Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Reality Bites

It hurts you so much,
to lose the only good you own.
It hurts even more,
knowing its all gone.
but not once did you hate it.
even after what it did.
it only taught you some shit.
Reality really bites.
(this is my first poem, so I cant help blogging it everytime :).. )

7 comments:

Deathlight said...

The always favorite!! xD.. I love it

Gisha Mariyam Ahmed said...

thankies. :D

Mumaaf said...

A good attempt..! Don't worry you have the tempo for writing poetry,,try more.. Express your views and perceptions as you experience and perceive them,then,you will succeed and see the difference..CHEERS

Gisha Mariyam Ahmed said...

hey thanks a bunch mumaaf :D

Anonymous said...

it should be 'lose' instead of 'loose'

loose means dhoovefa like a scrunchie tied loosely. lose gelligen dhiun. losing something.

Gisha Mariyam Ahmed said...

yeah thanks anon.. it was a spellin mistake :D

naji said...

hey where did u get this?